Your grad statement, edited by tomorrow.

Your statement of purpose, edited and rewritten from your draft. $79, back in 1 day.

Edit my statement$79 · one statement · 1 day

Three steps

01Send your draft

02We edit and rewrite

03You make it yours

Before and after

Before · a sample, made upI have always been fascinated by computer science since I was a child, and I am applying to your esteemed program because of its excellent faculty and world-class research facilities.

After · same facts, sampleIn my third year I spent four months failing to make a rainfall model run on a laptop with 4 GB of memory. The fix I found — streaming the grid in tiles — is the reason I want to join Dr. Okafor's flood-forecasting group, where the data is a thousand times larger and the deadline is a real river.

Both are written samples; the applicant, the rainfall model and Dr. Okafor are invented for the example. Your statement is built only from your own draft and facts. See a full sample edit.

$79one statement · up to 1,200 words · back in 1 day

A marked-up edit of your draft
A clean rewrite, inside the word limit
A stronger “why this program” paragraph, from your facts
A cut list and a read-aloud guide
One free pass on your changes within 7 days

£65 incl. VAT in the UK · A$119 · C$105. Master's, PhD or MBA. More statements: one order each.

Edit my statement

Send your draft

Your name

Email for the edit

Which degree?

Word limit

Program and university (as the application names it; add the professor or lab if you have one) The prompt, word for word Your draft (paste it; if you have none, write “no draft yet”) The facts behind it (what you worked on, what went wrong, what you want to study and with whom — only what is true) Anything to keep, cut or avoid (optional)

Your deadline

Where are you?

I understand the edit is built only from my own draft and facts, that nothing will be invented, that I will make the final changes and submit the statement myself, that nobody can promise admission, and that it is on me to check each program's rules on outside help.

Questions

Is this allowed?

Editing help is what advisers, writing centres and paid editors give every year; what programs forbid is someone else writing your statement or inventing facts. We work only from your draft and your facts, you make the final changes and submit it yourself, and we ask you to check each program's rules on outside help.

What exactly comes back?

A marked-up edit of your draft, a clean rewritten version within the word limit, a stronger “why this program” paragraph built from the facts you give us, a cut list of the sentences that were not earning their place, and a short read-aloud guide. One statement up to 1,200 words per order; a second program's version is one order each.

I have no draft yet — can you still help?

Yes. Answer the questions on the form in your own words: what you worked on, what went wrong, what you want to study and with whom. We build the first draft from exactly those facts and nothing else, then you edit it into your voice. Tell us the deadline so the day count works.

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